All Comments on 'Sugar AVE (You Think You Know)'

if you were to ask me, Iw ould say that I see promise in this poem, its pretty good, not all jammed up with words not needed. well, I liked it ( the premise) and I am kinda surprised no other comments were left. hope to see more from you here

maria

i am such a fan of less is more! thank you for your sparing words and getting large on meaning!!!!

i am such a fan of less is more! thank you for your sparing words and getting large on meaning!!!!

and read all your poems. They are all good. This

one said the most to me and I loved the flow.

Less is more,,,but you already know that.