All Comments on 'SummerMornings'

by Honey123

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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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Made feel very hot on this cool autumn morning.

ty,BD

ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 19 years ago
Okay....

That made me feel warmer. Nice visuals.

SummerMorningSummerMorningover 19 years ago
Title

What could I do but vote the way I did? Not that it was very hard or painful - you could try being somewhat more domineering ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Not bad

Not bad, not bad....

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
wow~

eroticly pleaseing..

great poem...your as

tantalizing as a bit o honey~

gotwood49gotwood49over 19 years ago
Very nice, honey...

...it has a very sensual, languid feel to it. Summer Morning should feel very proud!

postobitumpostobitumover 19 years ago
I loved

the very end. I think that was what really made the poem. :)

foehnfoehnover 19 years ago
sweet simplicity

I was impressed by the simplicity and clarity of this reverie; and also, the strong ending, which was clever without being too "cute," I thought. I'm sort of a sucker for good, strong, every-day nouns and adjectives (words, ears, eyes, skin) and the inventiveness of "SummerMornings" seemed totally necessary. I'd have changed "winters" to either "winter's" or "winter" ...

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