All Comments on 'sunset's kiss'

I remember when you first came on here, so sweet, so ready to learn, now look what you've gone and done!! this is absolutely beautiful-

I especially liked this part-

your touch,

my drug

that reaches heart,

igniting rapid thunder.

addiction seeks a home

where vacancy's sign

now rests on dreamy wonders.

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the alliteration is excellent and your choice of words is really good, this poem flowed and touched me tender, sang it's way into my heart, thank you :)