All Comments on 'Sweet little gaggle of lines'

How many of us have thought up poems while we drive or commute by train or bus? I know I have, and you've captured perfectly the idle woolgathering that brings such poems to light. Is it profound or utterly beautiful? No, but it does what it seems intended to do and that's good enough.

A recommendation on the new poems review thread and a few fives at least before this one slips into obscurity. :)

Ahhh, fickle muse amused by filling you with brilliant lines when far away from paper and pen. It's like a phantom line that vanishes as quick as it appears.

Ha Ha it's your child ... but see it's up on it's feet and standing alone without support!

Yeah what they said...and more...I like these lines:

You've been my Sudoku,?

Though of an inferior sort -

A poet writes on poem writing. I like it. I like the self depricating spirit, the humor, the images and the slight melancholy. This is the right kind of poem for me.