All Comments on 'Sweet Salty Tears'

Very good read. I think it would've been a little better if you would take the one line singular words and match them with the other. If that makes sense. I think it would've flowed much better. Over-all, you did great :)

very unique and original, endearing, and twisting~

sweet salty tears is relateable, and the ending was

a twist I didn't expect...awesome~