All Comments on 'Swishing Tales'

Whoa!

Where's the rest of this tale well told?

Feels like I got thrown

by your stallion in mid-stride;

or perhaps, didn't want the ride to end...

with LeBroz...

was not wanting the

ride to end...

*winks*

saddle up girl,

and go with it !

Such a naughty horse! I think he caught your scent...

Fly

tried writing about a horse tale...but, I like the way you played with the idea ..bluerains

very tight writing, last eight lines rise above ordinary

whoa! like this

"the boy is a play park pony

full on trampled hay"

I did not notice at first that you slip in and out of rhyme, is there a reason for it?

THE BUCKING HORSE IN A BAR, A CIRCUS OR FAIR, AND A DUDE RANCH. TK U MLJ LV NV