All Comments on 'Swt Magnolia'

Great work!!!

I truly pray you are a sister of the south because you

write it so well. This was a cool form and a beautiful

poem for me. The rhyming lines need a little help.

I love to rhyme and it does cost you some votes from time to

time. So what, this is a good poem a lovely visional, but

I would play with the rhyme lines as far as count. Please

write more, maybe something with a mint julip and a heavy

heart.