All Comments on 'Take, Eat'

by unpredictablebijou

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AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
You're a natural teacher

and there are lessons to be learned here, if only the reader pauses and thinks. :-)

Your poem has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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Ange hit the nail — there's lots here to read and soak up, plenty of food for thought.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
More like an angry prophet!

Wow! How strong and gutsy. You sure don't bow to any false Gods. And like both the ancient protesters from Jobe to Jesus, you connect with the endless chain (unbroken by neither human nor devine intervention) of those who question mindless endless cruelty.

swallowedscreamswallowedscreamabout 16 years ago
Whoa

Serious punch in this. "Which feast do the gods prefer?" It was questioning such as this that made me stop teaching Sunday school eons ago.

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