All Comments on 'Take Me, Tease Me'

Take Me, Tease Me was a beautifully written poem of love (and lust) that captured every erotic aspect of sexuality. In a nutshell, it was, as the title of my comment states, pure heaven to read something like this. Thanks again, and again, and again. . .

nice descriptive narrative. you really did capture the urgency and lust involved in sex. well done.