All Comments on 'TASTE'

nice change of pace, well written, strong vocabulary.

some really good images and the alliteration is not overpowering. It does go on rather long which is not necessarily a bad thing but you might want to start looking at a poem a week or two after you write it to see if there is anything you want to change or cut. I often find that a little space leads me to see where I can lose unnecessary words or tighten up the language overall. It's like the difference between diluting and concentrating: concentrated is more powerful.

Just my opinion and thanks for sharing it. :)

Nothing quite like using a man in bondage :)

I thrust the air

As if it will submit to my needs

Gives both a picture and a feeling. Great work!