by average gina
Some great lines in this one.
I find this one to be very appealing: Her eyes had the wisdom of water
It seemed that what was written was by one person....both of you seemed to have melded your thoughts into one, and the words, the syntax, the metaphors, all were wonderfully woven into a piece that gives honor to the one whose heart is still kept.
very erotic and real, the emotion really translates, loved the chocolate line.