All Comments on 'Tears to Shed'

I don't know the problem, nor am I in any position to give advice, but I think words like these need to be seen. I never said somethings to my brother or my former best friend and I can tell you it has haunted me ever since. I think you should send it for you so that you have the security in mind to know that your voice was heard whether it was listened to will has yet to be determined. Send it. And I've been reading stories since my birth and I can tell you that your stories are good. You are smarter than you give yourself credit, and I for one know that I would never want to lose a friend with such talent. Send it.

An interesting post...yet, to my ears, the emotional pitch is flat, as in no tone, as if the words have been over rehearsed into exhaustion.

parts of her body. TK U MLJ LV NV

Reviewed in the Feb 21, 2012 New Poetry Recommendation thread.