All Comments on 'Technicolor Betty Paige'

by Merrymaker

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TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Nice stuff

~Night-blooming jasmine robes the air

In exotic film-noir style~

I love " robes the air"

great phrase

~Shady dame, an enticing dream

Littered in corsets, seamed stockings, and Mary Jane heels

Single malt and perfect lipstick at the ready

Invitation, but an eyelash away......~

and that is so very film noir

I'd really like to meet this woman

: )

~Senses always reel this loop

Each time she rides the current back

Full of electric spice and life

My Technicolor Betty Paige.~

This last verse makes me think maybe it is a real person you are remembering?

Or a movie clip..

Either way i loved this

whoever or whatever the inspiration was...it must be something

Thank you

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
I dont use the thermometer

"Night-blooming jasmine robes the air

In exotic film-noir style"

This is so impressive I will say it twice.

This is so impressive.

Such that it leaves me breaking my own rule of not using the word "so"

I do not know Betty Paige. But she is proud.

~anna

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
hey!

Hey- T used the same quote!

Night-blooming jasmine robes the air

In exotic film-noir style

I personally was attracted to the film-noir style, it set the mood with so few words. Perfect

Maria2394Maria2394over 19 years ago
I was too

going to quote that same line, very well done MM, some new phrasing, great images and I am a huge fan of film noir, love this poem!!!

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