All Comments on 'tectonics'

convection current

of molten magma

moves these plates

your way

damn, geology will never be the same

Miss Cordelia, mistress of the word

I think you have inspired me

One tiny suggestion: try ahhh in italics. I think it may work better.

"Buoy my being" is a fine phrase and image.

The first three stanzas use alliteration nicely.

I like the first half of the poem quite a bit.

The second half gives me problems in following your thought

and connecting it strongly with the opening.

And it is a harsher read since you have avoided similar sounds.

I would guess that this was a purposeful choice.

Very well done, and heartfelt. Thank you.

I remain, Thesandman

That was supposed to be 100% Sorry about that. I really DID like it!

Thesandman