All Comments on 'Tha Moon n Stars'

a softer side shows inner beauty...nicely done///blue

Mothers can say "No" in the sweetest way;

perhaps that is why,

when they grow up they want another

who'll tell them "No" so sweetly...

you have really developed a very recognizable style!

I remember this one and 'YES' It should be submitted and added to your list <grin> very nice write

is the sweetest thing..

what a delicate and tender write..

so very sweet RF !

I wanted to say ... awwwwwwe.

with a wink to tha moon..

-sGp-

...what children bring out in us. This poem captures that very nicely.

ty,bd

(Scratching head) So, why do you have the line breaks where they are? Do line breaks make it poetry?