All Comments on 'that aint not half not bad aint it'

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AngelineAngelinealmost 16 years ago
Your Poem

has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!

KOLKOREKOLKOREalmost 16 years ago
Translation: I had the best time of my life...

To play a bit with your language it's has been a screeching dizzying play on my imagination with menacing teasing images all pretending to be ugly just so that I could be even more jealous of how good you had it with that woman! And: "aint not half not bad"... indeed! Those double negatives...there is no hiding anymore; just come and say it: Hey all, do you hear...I had the best time of my life!

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 16 years ago
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Displaying an underappreciated fact that the art of the title is almost as important as the art of the poem itself.

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