by FlippantDavid
has been recommended in the New Poems Review thread on Literotica's Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum. Thanks for the read!
To play a bit with your language it's has been a screeching dizzying play on my imagination with menacing teasing images all pretending to be ugly just so that I could be even more jealous of how good you had it with that woman! And: "aint not half not bad"... indeed! Those double negatives...there is no hiding anymore; just come and say it: Hey all, do you hear...I had the best time of my life!
Displaying an underappreciated fact that the art of the title is almost as important as the art of the poem itself.