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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Grown Up

Feel brighter for having read your reminiscences. You have summarised in your poem a strong sense memory and a feeling of "I've done that too"

Very apt that you let his tool soften before release

tazz317tazz317about 5 years ago
BOTTOM LINES

waiting to cum inside you. TK U MLJ LV NV

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uover 3 years ago
Beautifully Written...

My favorite sexual position and can attest to the wonderful sensations the woman,who has all the control,and the man who who submits to the pleasure she gives each equally.....Beautifully done.

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