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Until I gasp as they delve into that aching warmth

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This was "A Study in Writing an Erotic Poem." It's meant more of an art form than for pure enjoyment. Though, I won't say I didn't enjoy writing it. As for Swoon, yes, actually I think swoon works better in place of gasp. Lol. Duly note.