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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Quite nicely done. I'd suggest "Rutting" would be a better title then the one you have chosen

Rutting is usually applied to the males, such as young male deer clashing antlers in the sexual excitement of mating season; however, it is also applied to pigs and the way they dig up the ground looking for food--an interesting word choice but the poem is a happy ode to the pleasures of cock sucking. Keep at it! All good will cum of it. No man ever abandoned a good cock sucker and no good cock sucker ever has an empty mouth.

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