by freakyfreaky469
You made me want to smell mystery man! What is it about a mans scent that is so entoxicating? My favorite... Old spice, sweat, arosal. Of fuck... Yummy!!!
I liked the parenthetical self-talk. Although, if recited, one wouldn't imagine them differently than the other lines, I found myself imagining (poems are supposed to do that right?) those in parentheses to be what the poet said out loud and the others what she (or he) thought. That simple difference is what got me thinking and imagining.
good job! perceptive, emotional, passionate--smells can produce erotic feelings even years after when a similar odor reminds of a long forgotten event
It's not the bathrobe that's the fetish, it's the man who wears it...
Dr. Richard von Krafft ebbing would have been definitely interested in this one !!