All Comments on 'The Bloom'

There are a few of those, but I'll just mention the content instead.

"to pollinate inspiration"

"recognition in a burst

the blooming!"

Some very good lines there. :)

Excuse me for using the "V" word, this needs a bit of clarification, it is as if you are playing with words, but couldn't decide where to go."time sprout a life" is a great line, after that, I cannot decide what the intent is.

"un-thought of" I am unsure of this. I like the idea of un-thought (zen) but again it is not clear, if this is the idea you are playing with.

"the un-thought of

burried a seed,

deep in nothing

time sprout a life"

how I feel about this one Art.. I love it... feel it...and so enjoy it...

du lac