All Comments on 'The Book of Unwritten Knowledge'

Kept me up all night, couldn't put it down.

getting sick of your "NOVEL" popularity already!!

good write...

~LB~

It took me a moment to figure out pro-mos. I was wondering what a mos was. lol It's promos.

You don't use a semicolon after "by" and "dedicated to."

I agree with quasar about this needing to be more poetic, but I do think you have something to work with here.

Interesting concept that could have been expressed in a more poetic manner but truely thought worthy.

The little novelty hit

That would sit bracketed

By two more serious bits.