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by LaSalia

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THE SUN DONT STEAL

its purpose is to reveal. TK U MLJ LV NV

LaSaliaLaSaliaalmost 12 years agoAuthor
The Sun Does Steal

When you don't want the night to end, it feels of thievery.

William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
Another 5 Star poem

I'm not sure it should be categorized as erotic but, like this authors other submissions, it merits even more than the top rating possible in the Literotica system.

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I went to school for creative writing but haven't tried to make a living off it yet. Right now I just need an outlet for my creative juices, ;-). The things I write for this site are VERY dark. If you're a hopeless romantic and want to read about two people who are sweet an...