All Comments on 'The Decomposing of a Great'

loved it. been there (probably been her). watch the spelling, though.

Starting strong but as keacreme mentions in the previous comment, watch that spelling. Line 4 - their should be there; "into a deadly fend," last word should be fiend. Such typos can be overlooked if rare; if common, you'll lose any potential readers.

This is a really stark, killer poem. The mixture of erotic images and harsh reality works well. I'd love to hear a gritty man-voice read this poem aloud.

I loved the gritty tone of this. Some great lines here.

Good read