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by NorthernBeauty

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Sweet Domination ~

I can feel the love for your sweet one.

Nice pen, and keep'm coming ~!!

A suggestion, new wording, metaphors and imagery

would make this sparkle and pack a punch.

I like the thoughts just needs a lil ummph ~

No offense intended~ Just me ...

*Smiles*

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