All Comments on 'The Drop'

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HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 9 years ago
Serious stuff

Not an upright jerker to be seen

No struggles in your rope play

I could almost, but not quite, see a bungee if I squinted, ever so hard

An interesting piece

Noose work!

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
Excellent !

this Poem could be referring to a Hangman's execution or a Paratrooper droppin' into Enemy territory or an Olympic Diving competitor [ or as HoneyA has so aptly put it a Bungee jump ] : 5-ed .

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 9 years ago
@Ash

But did you see the sub, hogtied and suspended from the dungeon ceiling? Or would that be just me again? *adjusts glasses*

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
HoneyA : Wow !! Perfect

Observation !!! Your perception is sharper than mine !! Attagal !!!

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