All Comments on 'The Hurdle'

A more complex write than your usual ~ with currents of feelings swirling all 'round. Well done.

you know what I had to say Art.. you are now on your way to a new writing world. congrats babe proud of you

du lac~

This is quite different from your usual work, MeT. I give it 5.

Tess

we all know why i liked this

nin-

with this one-

always a pleasure to read your words,

and moreso to feel them.

we have all been here before,

I know..

while reading the words

of a heart, .. longing-

my soul was screaming-

....JUMP!...

*****sGp

strength in form and images...has a wonderful feeling of motion...just a delightful pen...smiles/blue

????? This is supposed to be poetry? Give me (and all of us) a break.