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by Ciel_Noir

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
A FIT OF ANGER

could destroy a dream. TK U MLJ LV NV

KobaKobaabout 12 years ago

You have a gift for poetic compactness! Every word in the poem counts. Wonderful alliterations! Interesting rhymes. You make it seem easy but my guess is you work hard on your poetry. Well done! A 5!

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