All Comments on 'The Memory of Water'

Just relish the metaphor without trying to over think it.

There is something about the liquid attraction of water that is eternal.

told. A simple and elegant poem

Mentioned in today's new poem reviews

Very nice, it makes me want to read more of your work.

Simply Gorgeous imagery and to me, the metaphor is deeply profound.

expressed so well...I read that page a couple years back..wonderful article...you make it flow like a stream...blue

There is no "memory of water" that we can be like and so the "sentimental" characterization. Sentiment is fine, even tear-jerky sentiment is fine. What makes something sentimental is the falsehood behind the idea.

This is not meant as an attack, just a comment on how some readers will react to such "images".