All Comments on 'The Mistake'

that this mistake doesn't cause another...if you know what I mean!

The way you said at the end: “our incredible mistake”, it reminds me of people saying ‘you are baaad…’, meaning the exact opposite. If you meant it for real, I did not see any real dread. Otherwise, I liked it when you dared to use original imagery (“the kiss was carnal”), but I want to encourage you to use more of that kind of imagery, maybe less generalized language.

The Best poem I have read on this site. A little late to have full impact; as original thought this is award territory. The credit can only be understated.