The Muse's Poem

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avrgblkgrl
avrgblkgrl
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This is not a love poem.
 Let us not insult each other
By wasting pretty words
 Or precious time.
 We are not of the same cut
 As those romantics,
 Those who see eternity
In the face of flowers.
 
This muse has already,
Willingly,
 Spread her legs,
 Allowed you to taste her sweetness,
 To feel the silkiness
Of her petals
 Against your tongue,
 And pluck,
 Understanding that where there is
 Pure art
 There is divine ecstasy
 And there is exquisite pain.
 One cannot be truly free
Of the other,
 Not if you wish to create.

Do you wish to create?
Then do not ask
 Take what you are fiending for
 From this body.
 Do not settle for mere mimicry.
I will not let you lose
 Your beauty
 Or what is uniquely yours
 To a mere illusion of lust.
 If the searching of my hands distracts
 Then bind me,
 Bend me over,
 Drive deeply,
 Break into me,
 Feel the core of the matter
 Against your most sensitive spot,
 Repeatedly rub,
 Let friction irritate,
 Give flicker to the flame.
 
Anyone can write a love poem.
 Love is polite.
 You need to feel more than the offerings of pleasantries.
You need to be rendered speechless,
 Inaudible,
 As we approach the precipice of rawness,
Skin hitting skin.
 This is where sounds leave the lips,
 Where music is born,
 Where men with small
 Minds
 Dream up myths
 To define what they cannot comprehend.
 You are larger than this moment.
 You are power.
 You thought it sex
 But feel the fuck of it
As you ride me.
 Breathe in my scent,
 Fill your lungs with me
 As you release
 Into your muse,
Into me.
 
And, what now drips down my leg
 Is you at your best,
 Combined with what is left of me.
 Gather it in your stylus.
 Now you are ready
 To write,
 Not of love
 But of
Poetry,
 Of life.
 This was never meant to be
A love poem.
 I am not your lover.
 I am your muse.
 
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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Powerfully Spoken

I enjoyed this powerfully spoken poem. It has a beautiful feel to it, almost raw, yet not fully. It left me encouraged, creative, and satisfied. Beautiful work.

avrgblkgrlavrgblkgrlover 9 years agoAuthor
Just so you know...

Champagne, actually fiending is a word and does apply. Google it. I'm sorry if you are not familiar with it. Really, you should have looked it up before the comment. It is not a typo nor uncommon. Sorry.

-ABG

champagne1982champagne1982over 9 years ago
good work

I'm not sure what "fiending" means. It does distract me, but I'm a bit of a grammarian perfectionist and thus prone to getting cranky by small mistakes .. No worries though, girl, my work is full of little typos that a fast edit misses and a slower read reveals and yes, I'm too lazy to go back and fix. The readers have been kind enough to ignore mine, so I won't hold your odd word against you when I rate this poem. Well done erotica is so good to find.

JWrenJWrenalmost 10 years ago
Love it!

This may not be a love poem but there is love aplenty in there: love of your craft. Each line and word is thoughtful, ultimately conveying a somewhat pertinent message from a talented writer. Never confuse sex with love . . .

CleardaynowCleardaynowalmost 10 years ago
Extraordinarily good

This is extraordinarily good. I generally do not read the erotic poems (as mostly they aren’t). I stumbled on this as the Erotica system flagged it at the top of its ‘recommended list’ – cleverer than I had realised.

It creates a very strong and compelling persona for the speaker and its mix of rational and irrational is exquisite.

Have now read your other poems – which I like – but this I think is the best.

TzaraTzaraalmost 10 years ago
This is very good.

It's good both as poetry and as erotica (especially as a kind of BDSM themed erotica), which is a woefully rare combination. I'm curious about what appear to be the slight indentations--are those intentional?

I really like the end of the poem.

The word "fiending" seemed off to me. Is that slang?

Good poem.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
*****

Five.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineeralmost 10 years ago

This is so well written. A good poem demands a second and third reading, maybe more. This does. I need to digest it more.

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsalmost 10 years ago
Excellent

This is a keeper!

todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
sensational

Not b ch more to say really, it would kill the moment