All Comments on 'the parlor'

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AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
A very moving and erotic...

poem, just dripping with sensuality. Well done.

CeriseNoireCeriseNoirealmost 17 years ago
Just love...

the two final lines of this poem. The overall rhythm just adds to the mood of erotic desperation.

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