All Comments on 'The Road to Hondo'

some beautiful images here, but a little bit bogged down with extra words. If you were to carve a little closer, you'd have, for example

The moon ascended a wooden fence

and stepped up through power lines

like a musical note rising scale

beginning the night's long, silent song.

which is gorgeous. There is a lot here to commend, Art. Keep up the writing. This longs for editing, though, to let its light shine.

This poem was mentioned in New Poems Reviews. C.o.S.

Another of Art's classic Texas tales

Complete in one telling

On the road to Hondo...