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by Jorunn

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mitchawamitchawa5 months ago

Very nicely done. The BAAB rhyme scheme fits the story well. It is a love story where a maiden somehow saves a "warrior" from death. A timeless dragon and the fleeing to a distant shore is in keeping with the Viking lifestyle. The second time Ragnor fell Ailsinn was unable to save him and knew his time had passed and the best way she could show her love was to let him go. The poem is well-paced and the appearance of the ravens is well-chosen for a symbol of passing.

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A poet at heart, and writer of stories; of love, romance and nature's glories. There is some of me in all of my stories. I am a Huldra, a Shield-Maiden, and a Valkyrie. Jorunn Skaldmaer is an historical figure, one of the only known female Skaldic poets, and worked in the ...