The Santa Clause Effect

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Life does not turn out like we perceived as a child.
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Brittni4u
Brittni4u
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A child’s beliefs secured unseen,
From the words of omniscient adults.
Of course they’re wise, their experience keen,
The young oblivious to their faults.

Through those innocent eyes, all we trust,
Need not to debate their tale.
To disbelieve would seem unjust,
For no grown-up could possibly fail.

Grandma’s cooking was the best,
Grandpa’s jokes made us laugh.
A comforting mother without test,
Dad helped us create our path.

A hero uncle, a heroine aunt,
Playing with cousins all day.
Just one more hour, will you grant?
Exciting response of, “Yes you may.”

Tucked into bed forever you’re safe,
For bad happens to others.
With prayers be said, full of faith,
Shielding you with impenetrable covers.

Excitement shown for Santa comes tonight,
And for a tooth, cash be brought by a fairy.
Bunny eggs hidden, oh so bright,
A prince or princess we will marry.

Forever days, in a blink have vanished,
The young becomes all grown.
Fairy tale thinking will soon be banished,
An ugly reality shall be shown.

We learn that Santa doesn’t exist,
Yet faith should not be lost?
No bunny, no fairy, all easily dismissed,
Trust taken at such a high cost.

Grandpa passes, for time had caught him,
Grandma forgets the things she knew.
Tragedy, pain, the world be grim,
Parent promises, all too often, untrue.

Uncle arrested a hero he’s not,
Aunt’s heroine from is to on.
Life’s movie absorbs an alternative plot,
Happy endings are the ultimate con.

Now with children of our own,
We teach them what we’re taught,
Pass the lie for we condone,
Eventually, we too, get caught.

All age, get sick and eventually die,
No matter how much we fight,
Work hard to obtain our piece of the pie,
With guarantees, you have no right.

So grab your good, where you find,
Little things matter the most.
Use the ugly to remove the blind,
Before we become a ghost.

Rain hitting the roof or a first kiss,
Might strike you as your good.
A house, your child, a true love’s bliss,
Makes you feel the way you should.

Warm coffee, a trip, the perfect day,
Could satisfy your need.
To paint, to write, to mold the clay,
Could help you stop the bleed.

Though finding optimism can be a task,
Especially at hour eleven.
Anticipate Santa, too much to ask?
Like we did when we were seven.

Brittni4u
Brittni4u
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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brought incredible memories of childhood

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great poem

Veey moving and poignant poem, with a great flow and rhymes. Sooner or later, childhood innocence and wimsy fades away and we have to face the real world. Nothing lasts forever. Yes, the trust is often taken at too high of a cost. I especially liked this part: "Life’s movie absorbs an alternative plot,

Happy endings are the ultimate con."  And the conclusion:

"Though finding optimism can be a task,

Especially at hour eleven.

Anticipate Santa, too much to ask?

Like we did when we were seven."

Keep up the great work, you are very talented. And happy Valentine's Day! I wish you the best.

FortbruceFortbruceabout 3 years ago

Wonderful poem Britt!

Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
as per the usual

You have a tendency to take real world topics and blend them into a simple rhyming form. If it wasn't for the seriousness of the topic I'd say it was a plain old limerick. The content however is so very mature. Couldn't agree more with the overall message. In these times, I think it's excellent to be hopeful no matter how silly it may seem.

Brittni4uBrittni4uabout 3 years agoAuthor
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The line "Aunt's heroine from is to on" means when we were younger we looked at her as a heroine...hence the term, "Is"....as we have grown we realize she is on heroin....hence the term "on"

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