All Comments on 'The Self'

....as the many poems you've posted the past few days. You have so much to offer! Keep posting

thank you for letting us follow through your thought process of discovery, very nice

truths given in a wonderful way.

Another piece of you slips into place and explains a bit about your writing.

: )

you write from a very wise place

Thank you for sharing

A very nice read,

tying up the concept in a neat circled bow.

The poet might consider removing the three remaining articles.

"The" stands out garishly to the eye,

and making the nouns plural,

might fit better and the "a"s would not be needed.

(Just a stylistic suggestion)

Please keep writing and sharing.

and image as well....peace//bluerain