by Remec
I love the form and you did a fine job with the poem. Very good.
I liked "mechanics of breaking love..."
Nicely done, Remec. ~ Imp
to make..love with you.
sometimes difficult if you can't find the trust
words beautifully written. :) Thanks for sharing the poem with us. ~ Red.
This poem was mentioned in today's New Poems Reviews.
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Such a well done ghazal ~ I do pick up and learn a few things, especially with something as distinctive as the ghazal. Even has a bit of a wistful air about it.