All Comments on 'The Temptation'

ok, of course i get this... let's hope she doesn't make it a habit (sorry!). i'm not finding myself engaging with it, though - it's a poem, granted, but doesn't touch me. not the subject matter - that's not exactly new but then what is in poetry - and i suppose the language is intended to place this in a certain time-period in history... your meter's fine, your format, rhyming...

it must be me. sorry :) i'm just not making connection with it at any level other than 'head'. a 4 from me because, as a reader, i feel left out of the party. :(

I think this has a lot more going for it than most dirty dittys that are posted in the name of erotic poetry. This is definitely no ditty, well written and amusing too

I'm half way between the two other commentors, it could use a little editting. a 5

angel wings on the floor.

I love it.