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by The Fisherman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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your writing here displays a complexity I did not see before. You seem to be growing and that is nice to see. I could feel this work which to me is a wonderful sign for the poet. Keep writing and learning.

du lac~

J.DoeJ.Doeover 18 years ago
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The opening stanza of this poem is pleasant, but 'tireless tounge' is cliche.

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