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DeepGreenEyesover 14 years agoI read it out loud several times...
It's that kind of poem. I think the window is her heart. Even if that wasn't the intent, I like the way the poem feels in my mouth when I say it, as I see the image of the woman gazing down in my mind.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoAwesome
Just awesome and so simple, and yet it stays with a girl. Make a girl want to open her window.
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