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by SweetOblivion

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vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
I love this!

This poem rocks! It's got this slinky, lubricated erotic quality like being rubbed down with ultrasound gel (I know that's weird but I was going for a minty, silky, cool slippery thing). This one it getting a recommend and I think this is the best of yours I have read so far.

LadyGenevieveLadyGenevieveover 13 years ago

A symbolic feast - magnificent.

PoetGuyPoetGuyover 13 years ago
Interesting form that Poet Guy had not seen before.

The poem is pleasant enough, but rather vague, in Poet Guy's opinion. Words like "disingenuous," "narcissistic," and "febrile" give the poem a more distanced aspect than more direct or obvious language might (e.g., "fevered" for "febrile").

Simply an opinion, though. Your poems are always interesting.

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I enjoy caring relationships with quiet, polite, women with open minds and good senses of humour, be it in a longer-term arrangement or just a one off. If you are up for it, I will engage in daddy-ply, d/s play, impact play and other sensual games. Definitely not into hur...