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by svelte walker

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Wow- what a debut....

A powerful poem with strongly invoked sentiments. Well done. Keep writing.

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 20 years ago
I cannot stop reading

the first eight lines of this poem are so strong, their gravity kept pulling my eyes back up

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