All Comments on 'Ther Beauty within Her Beauty'

submission? If so, I gave you a 5, but set the therm at 75 and heres why.

I love the idea of your poem, but it needs some punctuation remedies and attention to smaller details. the words, "softly flutter", well, drop the *softly*, as flutter can really only be a soft thing, if you explain too much, put in extra words, it may diminish another readers focus as it did mine. ( but tis just my opinion...)

I hope you keep working on this one, and others, I am waiting to see what you come up with-- maria

Beautiful thoughts from a special man.