All Comments on 'There Are Still Tears Here'

by your un-ending talent

to produce a thought,

a glimmer of the past

this was an exceptional piece

that i totally get..

and understand.

forgive and forget

have never held hands,

in all the history of the world.

and it never will.

-sGp-

Your writing is so poignant,

deserving of a hug,

with hands that seek to comfort,

bringing solace to a bruised soul.

the broken trail

we leave behind

tears and blood and sand

and even that

over time and time

is washed away

by tide and rain and snow

we carry ours forever

yet forever will pass us by

as lay ourselves to sleep

all the pain and joy

we press between the pages

our bedtime stories

have no fairy tale ending

only everafter

I am told to look forward

well meaning friends

loving family

paid professionals

to times ahead

when as I cross trails

I have walked before

I have to stop and check

the ground for signs

to see if tears are here

yet I know they are

that is all I need

:)

-lobomao