All Comments on 'There Once was a Bimbo'

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DHerbertDHerbertover 2 years ago

... but only to think of more pork?

AlinaXAlinaXover 2 years agoAuthor

I'd forgotten until after submitting that I used the York/cork rhyme in my futanari limericks, rhyming there with 'fork'. But here I quite like the humorous combination of poet-as-bimbo and the not-quite-rhyme York/cork/work.

Qwer12Qwer12over 2 years ago
Now There Is Entertainment

That was just plain fun there. Loved it. Thanks for publishing. Cheers

CanadianMCanadianMover 2 years ago

Fun limericks Thanks for sharing.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowover 2 years ago

That tickled a certain sense. Very inspirational!

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You didn't live if you haven't laughed once,

and you shouldn't die, before you did it twice

have you heard, all good flings come in trees,

or was it on all fours?

You know, the best ones come in wives.

AlinaXAlinaXover 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the comments. It's nice when my daft sense of humour gets a laugh.

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