All Comments on 'Thistle'

by peach77

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellover 14 years ago
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I love this made me smile too it is the almost the Ugly Duckling story in reverse. Well done defintely the best of the day

lorencinolorencinoover 14 years ago
Elegant simplicity

So simple and yet so effective at evoking the beauty of the fresh-faced and unassuming among us. There is a rich contrast between the idea of "I'm only a thistle" and the fact that the thistle is, in fact, quite beautiful in its own unique way. Well done! <br><br>

[Mentioned in <i>New Poetry Reccommendations</i>]

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Ah but…

When the thistle blooms then it radiates its own vibrant personallity.

Best wishes.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

Very nicely done. Not a word wasted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
tentatively

how one word can come close to ruining an otherwise good poem. Drop that one word and read it, see how much stronger the poem is. Adverbs are crutches for those with weak vocabularies. You seem to have a good one though, don't allow that one thing to trip up your work.

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