All Comments on 'Thoughts at Autumn'

your ear is pretty solid and the images are clearly drawn. I would try to avoid expected rhymes. Shake us up a little: it's good for us! :-) C.o.S.

I really enjoyed the poem. I rather like my poems to rhyme perhaps I am old fashioned that way. I loved your descriptions of each season.

I noticed your bio and statement of delay due to a heart condition. You have written a very moving and comforting piece. I hope you have recovered well, whether you can or will ever post another mind enhancing work of art for us.

Thank you for sharing, and enlighten readers that we some times stray from what we should be caring for ... into a stressful world to cloud our thoughts and negatively influence our relationships. I WILL capture your words and read them often; or at least when I stumble across the page and realize "I Need To Relax and find my inner peace."