All Comments on 'Three Dreams About Sex'

Sounds more like two tastefully erotic dreams and a nightmare.

The first dream seems like a separate poem. More like a romantic rendition on a dream (where the following two have more of the raw feeling of a dream). Very artful development of the imagery which keeps a gentle erotic sensation …

The second dream seemed most real (per a dream) in its confusing structure and admittedly highly suggestive raw sexuality.

With the third nightmarish dream, I tried to settle the horrid images with wistfulness but failed. Perhaps you meant pain?

I first read this on the 5 in 5 thread and was quietly bowled over. I still adore the poem, and your workmanship. You have such a gift. It feels like robbery to read this for free. Thank you so much for sharing.

Bluebell, I mean.

You should put this in a gallery and charge admission.

Seemed like all one poem to me (but then I'm pretty confused a lot of the time, I have an intamite relationship with chaos) and a damn fine poem at that.