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This is my favorite of those you posted today. I like how you described the orange, and the nostalgic feeling of this poem - and the middle stanza is interesting. The layers of meaning make this an interesting poem I would read more than once.

WHAT IF THE RAYS AND HALLS OF SUNLIGHT ARE PATHWAYS TO AN UNKNOWN DESTINATION AND IF ONE COULD TRAVEL ON A ROUND WAY JOURNEY. tk u mlj lv nv

So sad...*sigh*