All Comments on 'Three Year Old Runs Afoul'

by LilDarlin

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lovelovegirllovelovegirlover 19 years ago
Fantastic

Hey lildarlin!

Your poems are just so great and fine - the first one broughyt a tear in my eye, the second made me sooo horny(more than usual lol) and your last one made me smile!

What more can you ask for ??

Fantastic poetry and so good literature!

Your friend

lovegirl

Sweet_ShaySweet_Shayover 19 years ago
Too cute!

This was so fun to read...I read it several times. I can just see this happenin !

You are a great story teller Lil...

MORE ! ~*~HOT_little_Twinkie_n_TX~*~

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
((((((((((((Lil))))))))))))

excellant hunni...lol........scotss

Minnie(virgin)Minnie(virgin)over 19 years ago
Chicken Humor

LilDarlin , I can relate to chickens. Once I had a little chicken with a bad leg. I held it in my lap. When my Mother came to put the chicken back in the coup we saw that the chicken had pooped on my nice dress. Well we ate that chicken when it grew up a little bigger. LilDarlin I love your humor. Minnie

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
YESSSSS

went straight to my heart..... it was written so much out of love u can feel it ::)) good job ~~~ONE~~~

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
LilDarlin, you're a poet and you know it!

LilD, as you can see,

Has just begun to write poetry,

And agree with me, I’m sure you would,

They’re all pretty fucking good.

So if you like her work tell her so,

And encourage her to write some mo’,

And though she got more poems up her sleeve,

There’s more to her, don’t misconceive.

If you’re ever feeling a little rough,

Chat to her, or read her stuff,

And when she’s not chasing chickens or downloading things,

She’ll cheer you up… and give you wings.

Hugs & Kisses,

Bob

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
very funny sweets

this poem is sooo funny especially cause I remember u telling me about it!! rotflmao** xoxo Smiley3132

skip.69skip.69over 19 years ago
Always

LilDarlin always goes straight to the point, and she sees fun in most situations. I wish I knew her - she must be an absolute gem to live with. I wish her luck with her kids - they sound like mine used to be when they were younger.

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